Winning Sales Copy

"We Write Winning Sales Copy"

"Does YOUR copy Sell?"

Dear Friend,

If you'd like to have a professional image, a site that sells and winning sales copy, then this might be the most important letter you'll ever read.

Here's why:

Do you currently have personalized ad copy that actually sells YOUR product or service? Everyone says they want it. . .but . . not many have it.

Here's what you get:

You get a sales letter nicely formatted on a web page when finished. It will be polished, ready to link to your order form and you're off and running.

Your final output will look similar to the letter you're reading now.

Almost no one puts true sales letters on their web sites and to quote one of the Internet marketing giants, "It beats the heck out of me."

Instead, they try to follow the marketing examples of dot com companies that are going bankrupt right and left.

If you want to make a healthy profit from your web site, you need to put a sales letter on it. Why?

Because people have been selling products by mail via direct mail letters for over 100 years. It's a tested, proven formula that works. The main thing that has changed is that you post the letter on a web site instead of printing and mailing it.

And, of course, there are differences in how you structure the letter since it's online. But the principle remains the same:

If you want to sell online, a crafted, targeted letter with a powerful offer needs to be posted on a web page. In short, use the same formula that has been selling billions of dollars through the mail for the last 100 years.

My company can provide this for you right now, today.

Now, I know you're probably skeptical. That's normal and healthy. Let me give you four good reasons why I can back up what I claim:

Four Reasons To Believe What I Say

Reason one:

A proven track record in sales and sales training. There are literally thousands of people on the Internet trying to tell you how to sell. How many of them have actually sold anything in the real world. . .ever?

Reason two:

Over 25 years of successful direct sales experience. 15 of those years were spent selling an intangible product. That product was membership in one of the most prestigious business organizations in the United States and Canada, The Better Business Bureau.

Reason three:

As vice-president of a State Better Business Bureau and regional manager for the National Council of Better Business Bureaus, I counseled thousands of small and medium size business owners on start-up and ongoing promotion of their businesses.

Reason four:

Offline advertising director for a community newspaper. Through my guidance and training, that newspaper has advanced from a small, sleepy, startup, bi-weekly publication to a vibrant, thriving weekly newspaper and increased revenues by over 400% in just a year! I love helping businesses prosper both offline and online!

Here is a summary of the
benefits you receive

Create a winning sales letter for your product.
Free up your time to market.
Provide you with unique copy.
Set yourself apart from the "cloned" pages prevalent on the Internet.
Provide you with "keyword rich" content.
Increase your chances of search engine placement.
Copy will provide the right information at the right time
No more guesswork
The service is cost effective
Save precious hours.
Edit your existing materials.
Insures fresh new content rich material.
Correct grammatical, spelling and punctuation errors.
Insure your professional profile
Write emails that induce the reader to click.
Increase visitors to your site.
Write winning ad copy.
Entice more visitors to click thru.

Now, you're probably wondering how and why we can do all those things.

Let me explain.

My services will give you sales copy that sells. Do you:

Need an opening web page that compels the reader to buy? You've got it.

What about an email message that entices? I can give you that too.

Would ad copy that results in a click-thru be beneficial? I can provide it.

Whether looking for a total overhaul or merely editing of your existing materials, All Biz Services can deliver.

Now, can I guarantee that you will become rich overnight as a result of my work? Of course not. Neither can anyone else. There are no guarantees in life OR in business.

The profit you make from your letter depends on these things in the order listed:

Success Factor One: Your web traffic -- Is it high or low quality? The better the quality of your traffic, the higher your conversion rate of hits to sales. If you need help getting traffic to your web site, see our product The Amazing Formula.

Success Factor Two: Your offer -- what is your product, price, terms, guarantee, and so forth? If you don't have a product learn how to Create Your Own Products in a Flash.

The formula I use forces you to provide me with the basic elements of a powerful offer. But you can't sell a dead duck. No letter in the world can sell a product that your target market doesn't want to buy.

Success Factor Three: Your input -- This is third in importance. My work is dependent on what you provide. Your input will be plugged into the formula I use and...

It's very powerful.

Finally, with my help I'm totally convinced we're going to churn out sizzling letters that follow all the success principles provided by the so-called "gurus".

Don't take my word for it.
Listen to what my customers say.

Patty, you are a gem. If you ever need a recommendation for your writing and editing skills, just send those who inquire to me and I will give you an A++++ rating! Your skills are amazing.

Teresa King www.ezineaction.com

All I can say is WOW and many, many thanks. I don't know how you were able to get inside my head and transfer my thoughts and feelings to paper, but you did it! I'm absolutely convinced I'm working today because you helped me out.

John R. Albuquerque, NM

It was a pleasant surprise to receive your response late last night. I know you walked that extra mile to accommodate my request despite that late unearthly hour, and I am greatly indebted. This is service unrivalled!

Your comments were very instructive and helpful, and I am very impressed. By following your suggestions, I managed to cut the verbosity down - result - a crisp, direct response-wanted web page which I think will draw in the sales. Your suggestions have all been adopted in the Products section under my new website. This new website will be opened to the public sometime mid-week.

Your fine work with this review of my web site has confirmed your professionalism and effectiveness. I would not hesitate to use and recommend your services highly to others when the need arise.

Once again, thank you. Have a great weekend!

Peter L., Australia

It's nice to know there are still some people out there is cyber world that take care of their business.

Betsy, Montreal, Canada

Hi Patty,

I like it! And I told you I'm picky !) Thank you so much!

You've accomplished exactly what I was hoping for - marketing copy that appeals directly and powerfully to my target audience!

Thanks again, Patty.

David Espino www.homebasedbusinessowner.com

Patty,

Wonderful! I really like them. You are a master at sales, designing e-mail letters and direct mail letter campaigns.

Tell your husband if you keep up this work I'm going to hire you as a surrogate wife! Hah-hah-hah!

Michael R., Ohio

Warning: Do NOT buy any copy writing service
unless it meets the following 6 criteria

There is a lot of confusion surrounding our field. I want to give you 6 criteria or elements you absolutely, positively must have in any solution you obtain:

One: Who is doing the work? A masters or doctorate in english is not necessarily a good candidate for writing sales material.

Two: What is their sales background? Make certain that the candidate has "real world" experience.

Three: Does the experience involve an "intangible" product or service? Selling used cars for example, is not a guarantee that the writer can sell intangibles.

Four: What do others have to say about their work? Can they provide real testimonials from satisfied customers?

Five: Do they make outlandish claims or promises? If they do, run (or in our case click) in the opposite direction.

Six: Can they provide examples of their work?

You get at least 10 times your money's worth!

I know of consultants who charge from $5,000 to $15,000 to do a sales letter. You will receive the same quality from me for a fraction of the price and I'll do the work for you!

In summary, here's what you get:

*100% customized sales letter

*Potent, targeted content

*Formatted for a web page when completed

*Polished and ready to link to your order page

*My Personal Hands-On Skill

*Keyword Rich Content

*My Personal Guarantee

If you respond right away, you pay only $225! That's less than 5% of the average cost of a "high-priced" consultant.

Only you can determine what your time is worth.

The question is, is it worth $225 to have someone craft ad copy that really sells your stuff?

You can easily waste 5 or 10 times that much money buying courses and products about ad copy that spout off a bunch of stuff that never really helps you.

You can easily waste that much money just trying out one or two sales letters that don't work.

You can easily lose out on 10, 20 or 30 times that much money by screwing around with marketing methods that simply don't work.

But most importantly, you can recoup your bucks this way:

All you need to do is sell two to four $100 products or services using my words to get your money back. If you don't do that, I'll be very surprised.

The heart and soul of your Internet business is your ad copy. It IS what drives sales. It's the engine. If you aren't willing to spend a few hundred dollars for that, then you really don't understand what makes people buy. In which case, you really DO need me!

Act immediately and receive the following bonuses

Since I know it's 100% to your benefit to act right away, I want to sweeten the pot and give you every possible reason to say YES today! If you respond immediately, you'll also receive the following:

Free bonus one: Order your sales letter today and receive an abbreviated version to use in your email campaigns.

Free bonus two: Order your sales letter today and also receive a version written as ad copy.

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Free bonus four: The Newbie Club Guide To The Internet. An overview of your own internet business. Receive advice and guidance from 19 successful internet marketers. This book is prepared and published by Joe Robson and Tom Glander, the well known owners of The Newbie Club.

You can't lose with our 100%,
ironclad, moneyback guarantee

By the way, these bonuses are yours to keep even in the unlikely event you decide to take advantage of our ironclad moneyback guarantee:

Your satisfaction is assured through our no risk, you-can't-lose, 100%, no-questions-asked, iron-clad moneyback guarantee. If for any reason, you aren't thrilled and satisfied with my work, just contact me within 10 days and we'll re-write or refund 100% of your purchase price. No hard feelings.

What I'm saying is, don't decide now if this product is for you. Just get it and try it out. If it doesn't do everything I say and more, if you don't save money, time and frustration, if it isn't life-changing, if it doesn't work for you, you have nothing to worry about because you can get every dime of your money back under our no-loopholes guarantee. So you have nothing to lose and everything to gain.

Here's how to order right now!

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To your success,

Patty Baldwin

All Biz Services

P.O. Box 1202

Tijeras, NM 87059

(505) 286-5836

P.S. I have to use a post office box because the snowplows knock down the mailboxes!

P.P.S. Remember, our offer of the free bonuses is limited. I can only guarantee you'll receive them if you order right away. So don't delay. Act now while it's fresh on your mind.

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